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Swasan engagement day used to be fastened which might be held after three months… Engagement day adopted via subsequent day can be their marriage…..
Swasan have been satisfied to listen to however on the similar time they have been desperate to find out about their lifestyles spouse….
Swara’s papa is strict guy he dislikes assembly sooner than marriage and time out all…
Shekar granted permission handiest to speak thru telephone…. ( what to do, over protecting father, however he’s right kind… we by no means knw what is going to occur at some point)
So swasan began having dialog thru telephones…..
Sanskar isn’t love caught youngster he too has responsiblities like place of work so right through night time or evenings he would communicate with swara…
Swara is an individual who is totally introvert sort to unknown or stranger… when she feels comfortable nobody can prevent her spontaniety…..
One day night time :
Swasan telephone convo :
Sans – swara…….
Swara – ha..
Sans – so what do u take into consideration me or do u have any expectation that ur lifestyles spouse will have to have those qualities???
Swara – now not such a lot however he will have to know to recognize elders and deal with my circle of relatives as his and basically “recognize his spouse”
Sans – oh oh….
Swara – wt oh oh???
Sans – not anything…
Swara – u most effective raised the query i simply gave u true solution….
Sans – the entirety is fine however the remaining line” appreciate spouse” do u assume husbands dont recognize their companions….
Swara – yup most commonly…. males’s assume gifting her jewel’s, purchasing her a saree and simply sharing ur industry drawback doesnt make her satisfied……
” u will have to find out about her feeling. How she feels being with u!! Talk together with her day by day, ask het did she have meals?? Take her out when ur loose greater than that give her smike dats sufficient to make her satisfied”…
Sans – shhhhhhhh…. u talk an excessive amount of…
Swara – poda unta poi sonnen paaru… nee thaney enta ketta.. enamo na mokkai potta madhuri solra.. ( u nly requested me proper however ur sounding as though im speaking sumthing beside the point)
Sans – y ru getting tensed.. keep cool…
Swara – what do u be expecting from me….
Sans – not anything best u ?
Swara – prevent buttering inform and wts cooking up in ur mind…..
Sans – okieee ” i dont be expecting an excessive amount of however my higher part will have to be my power and perceive my phrases.. will have to by no means nag me asking wt came about these days in ofc or blah blah… i do know to give an explanation for and percentage her”…..
Swara – huhhh alien….
Sans – then wt u are?? May b???
Swara – would possibly b??
Swara – inform na….
Sans – hmmmm……
Swara – ??????
Sans – my plum cake….
Swara used to be blushing u silly…
Sans – we boys are deficient its obscure woman’s ideas..
Swara – dont check out arduous u will finally end up changing into nutcase…
Sans – yeah ur right kind…. mens finally end up mad because of womens….
Swara – that is an excessive amount of… prevent speaking dangerous about womens….
Sans – when did i badmouth them its simply that we spoke what we felt….
Swa – dont act sanskar.. ur phrases are true….
Sans – y ru sounding as despite the fact that i’ve pointed u…. ” i stated womens however now not u sweetheart”….
Swa- im additionally a ladies proper….
Sans – however i didn’t utter swara proper…
Swa – ur artful mr.sanskar who is aware of to take on the location completely….
San – thank u ms. Plum….
Swa – y ru addressing me as plum??
Sans – bcz ur cheeks resemble plum ♥
Swa used to be blushing, okiee im feeling sleepy..
Sans – however ur dangerous….
Swa – y???
Sans – whr is my candy identify ms.plum??
Swa – sanskar will someone ask their nickname brazenly???
Sans – s… sanskar the nice….
Swa – good enough bye gud nyt swt drms…
Sans – my identify ?
Swa – mr.sanskar….
Sans – i do know…
Swa – bye….
Days handed swasan were given to understand abt eo different completely and now their degree of convenience has grow to be shut……
One day sanskar deliberate to take swara for an trip….. however she used to be afraid serious about her dad…. and she or he used to be additionally feeling fearful stated giant no…….
“Swara!! first time i’ve requested u onething cant u even do that for ur hubby???” He requested her with unhappy tone…
Swara felt unhappy by way of listening to his unhappy tone and permitted his request…
Its okay swara, we will be able to pass on another day he stated in cushy tone…
Swara used to be feeling dangerous” no i imply s.. we will be able to move out nowadays its order from ur plum”…
Sanskar used to be past global of happiness and jumped on his mattress like monkey…. yahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh………..
But im afraid wt if papa will get to find out about this day trip hubby???
Swara what did u name me???
Swara bit her tongue being stuck, i didn’t inform anything else….
No i heard one thing huuubbbb….
Sanskar !!!prevent dreaming and if u stay on speaking garbage then our trip plan would possibly b destroyed…
I dont know y u women are keen on bursting the bubble of happiness roaming on boys head…..
You guys think we’re breaking ur happiness..
Ok depart it !!! Can i talk to shomi aunty and search permission for taking u out??
I will be able to talk about and let u find out about our desicion sanskar….
Ok madame as u want…..
Swara took shomi’s permission and she or he helped her too sneek out with lend a hand of raglak.. so in the event that they r stuck they may be able to give raglak as excuse…
Swara kissed shomi’s cheeks because of overload of happiness….. she made herself presentable dressed in easy lengthy robe upto legs with easy make up leaving her hairs loose with central take hold of…. shomi kisses her brow and wanted her bye…
Raglak arrived and took swara. On the best way raglak have been teasing her such a lot have been as her cheeks became pink..
Ragini unknown about swara’s new identify she discussed,” prevent blushing swara!! u have become pink plum”……
On listening to the phrase plum swara blushed appearing her happiness……
Rags” omg shona prevent blushing my thinkings are going past”……
Swara” close ur mouth ladoo, jiju why ru quiet????”
Swara on seeing ur face such a lot questions are roaming on my mind stated laksh with snicker……
Come on prevent pulling me raglak…..
Soon they arrived the spot wr sanskar used to be ready in his automotive close to a lawn…..
Raglak greeted sanskar and wanted all d bst to swara and gave her hug…..raglak bid them bye went off….
Swara used to be status however seeing the opposite aspect of street donno easy methods to get started a dialog…….
Sans cleared his throat ” so until when have u deliberate to stick right here plum”…
On listening to the phrase plum swara’s face became red and became her face different aspect from being stuck…..
I noticed ur cherry face swara so inform me the rationale at the back of ur pinkish cheeks…..
sanskar u asking such a lot of questions come shall we pass….
Swasan were given settled within the automotive…. each have been maintaing silence donno what to speak subsequent..
They have been smiling enthusiastic about their telephone conversations have been they used to speak alot or even battle for third individual however right here they’re maintaing silence being in library….
Swara began, ” the place we going sanskar??”….
Sans shook his head “Its wonder”….
Swara rolled her eyes in approval…
Soon they arrived where, ” It used to be wooden space in wooded area”…
Sanskar dont inform me we’re going to spend our time right here…..
Wow swara ur too sensible!!!! We are staying right here (wink)
third pov :
Actually each were given to understand eo smartly and so sanskar plan to spend an afternoon together with her in nature’s good looks together with his plum….
They climbed the wooden space constructed on tree most sensible have been the home windows have been painted with glass colours and it had medium measurement door and at ease mattress within the centre with few chairs and tables…
We settled at the chairs and the sunrays are piercing in the course of the home windows illuminating the room with orange, pink and yellow ligts… it used to be majestic view… from the window we have been in a position to peer the town some distance clear of us….
Did u like this position swara ???
Wide smile crept on my face and shook my head in line with sanskar…
I used to be in a position to peer his face which used to be brilliant as lamp as i conveyed him my emotions concerning the position…..
I used to be having urge to hug him however my judgment of right and wrong stopped me from doing so…
Sanskar noticed her facial features and gave loud snigger…
Swara raised her eye brows asking him what???
Sans shook his head no….
Sanskar sang :
Verenna Verenna Vendum Oru Murai Sonnaal Pothum
Nilavaiyum Unthan Kaalmithiyaai Vaipaene Vaipaene……..
Sollavum Kooda Vaendaam Kannimaithaalae Poathum
Kaelvigal Indri Uyiraiyum Naan Tharuvene
Swara sang :
Ivan Yaaro Ivan Yaaro Vanthathu Etharkaaga
Sirikinraan Rasikinraan Enakkae Enakaaga
Ennaachu Enakkae Theriyavillai
En Moochin Kaaychal Kuraiyavillai
Ada Enna Ithu Enna Ithu Ippadi Maati Kondaen
Ithu Pidikirathaa Pidikallaiyaa Yaaridam Kaettu Solvaen
Then we spoke so much and now our degree of comfortable was as regards to so shut…
We had our lunch and deliberate to go back..
I used to be feeling drained because of lengthy pressure and considered taking small nap however enthusiastic about swara’s protection i selected no…. and requested her are we able to transfer…
We can keep right here for some time sankar… y dont u take a snooze???
” we want to succeed in the town, shall we transfer” sanskar stated her…..
Nahhh u take a snooze i will be able to b observing the surroundings….
Sanskar gave a sigh and slept leaving swara in her global….
Swara used to be watching the character and she or he took many snaps… whilst so she went close to sanskar and took his snap whilst napping… His face published that he used to be satisfied…..
Swara sat beside him at the floor and took a snap to tease him later….
Swara were given too bored and she or he too fell asleep subsequent to him on mattress however keeping up few ft distance…..
Sky began revealing sun shades of orangish purple solar settling down…..
Sanskar’s telephone disturbed his sleep and were given as much as test swara… he discovered her sound asleep with dicomfort adjusting on the finish of mattress….
( bcz no woman will percentage a mattress with a males until she has unbreakable relation with him)
Sanskar used to be giggling through seeing her place and the way self mindful she is whilst dozing too….
He moved against her took a qiuck snap and moved to the opposite aspect….
Sans checked the time it used to be five.00 pm they usually have been getting past due…
“Get up !!Its getting past due swara”,he referred to as out…
But no reaction from swara for previous five mints….
Sanskar climbed at the mattress sat on his legs and streched his palms to wake her however he with drew them….. once more he streched calling her identify however with drew his hand… alas he tapped her shoulders waking her from deep sleep…
Swara squeezed her eyes and slowly opened them to peer sanskar beside her….
What r u doing sanskar???
Ha im consuming ms.kumbakarani( woman shape)
Ms. Kumbakarni?? Wt identify is that this??
Bcz ur woman proper so i referred to as u kumbakarni as an alternative good enough karna….
Shappaaa mudiyala!! Sanskar( huhh i cnt tolerate u sanskar)
Okieee rise up allow us to depart…..
Sanskar used to be looking ahead to her dowm and swara made her presentable and reached the bottom…
They reached the lawn round 7.30 pm and raglak used to be in a position to pick out her…..
Raglak greeted sanskar and wanted bye and swara left him bidding bye… sanskar gave her wink… swara blushed because of shyness…..
Raglak being mature didn’t ask her about day trip however they wr simply pulling her legs..
Soon they reached gadodia space….
Shekar used to be looking ahead to trio…..
Trio have been gulping in worry….
Shekar – Is this the time to return house swara????
Swara used to be bowing her head in guilt…
Raglak safe her” uncle we handiest forced her to stick a bit of lengthy, since she might be leaving to her in-laws space quickly”….
Shekar – oh okieee… u will have her throughout day time raglak i wont ask u anything else however night time she will have to be inside of the home.. we dnt know what society would inform….
Raglak – yea we will be able to perceive uncle…
Shekar – untill marriage we will have to be protected and carefull.. i am hoping u perceive what’s the feeling at the back of my phrases.. being father its my responsibility proper…..
Raglak – ur right kind uncle..
Shekar – good enough come shall we have dinner…
All had dinner and went to sleep the place as raglak left bidding them bye……
Swasan telephone conv:
Sans – hiiii… any prblm???
Swa – no papa didn’t catch us redhand however he gave recommendation to not roam throughout nights and revel in throughout daylight hours….
Sans – oh okieee… its responsibility of a father to offer protection to her daughter…
Swa – hmm sure…..
Sans – had ur dinner??
Swa – yea and u??
Sans – haan….
Swa – i’ve present for u…. wait i will be able to ship…
Sans – good enough…..
Swara despatched him the percent which she took in wooden space the place he used to be busy in napping..
Sans – shit delete that percent….
Swa – no means honey….
Sans – now not dangerous i’ve was honey…
Swa – despatched him wink smiley and blushing too…..
Sans – despatched her the percent which he took whilst she used to be slumbering…
Swa – oi its offence to take some one’s percent with out their permission mr.honey….
Sans – oh ms.regulations who’s telling that??? Same applies for u too…
Swa – no means….
Sans – yup….
Both have been preventing( playfully) and bid gud nyt…..
But sleep used to be some distance from them….
Swara pov :
I were given up at 1st try whilst ur waking me sanskar.. however to steer clear of the location i acted dozing… omg!!! when u have been sitting subsequent to me and looking to strech ur hand and retreating them i felt blessed to have u as higher part….. u acted so geniunely…. i salute u sanskar…. i felt so satisfied however i concealed this from u sorry…….
Sans pov :
I do know swara u have been conscious and im a person with rules too.. i wont make the most of the location….. however i need to inform u dat i love u such a lot……
Swara texted sanskar “slept???”
Sans – no…. what occur plum???
Swa – if truth be told i were given up within the 1st try itself sanskar… i used to be simply pretending to sleep…… sorry…. i used to be feeling accountable for my act……
Sans – hahaha i knew that swara….
Swa- what?? How???
Sans – bcz… depart it…
Swa – ahh honey y do u all the time depart in cliffhang…
Sans – bcz i sensed ur goosepumps….
Swa – what??????????????
Sans – s……
Swa – sorry….
Sans – its okay everybody will take tym to b comfortable…..
Swa – sanskar i in point of fact like u and love being round u however nonetheless i want lil area for being greater than to near…
Sans – yeah no prblm i will be able to perceive swara…. dnt tension… tc… gud nyt plum..
Swa – im so satisfied to gt u as higher part honey… gud nyt tc……
Tadda lately its over……
Next one will b d ultimate shot……..
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